tp, I think we'd better stick with your first suggestion.
I particularly liked
which are kind of deleted, but not actually deleted, and certainly not deleted permanently and completely
D) Delete the thread. The thread will be removed permanently and will not be moved to deleted thread storage. According to the Charter, a thread may be deleted by boardwide vote if deemed necessary to preserve the peace, security or continuance of the board.
I think the parentheses would still work well there, and that a comma with 'it' might serve better than 'and', and that perhaps we should capitalize Deleted Thread Storage throughout the ballot, thus:
D) Delete the thread
(the thread will be removed permanently
, it will not be moved to
Deleted
Thread
Storage
). According to the Charter, a thread may be deleted by boardwide vote if deemed necessary to preserve the peace, security or continuance of the board.
B) Replace screen names with anonymous placeholders (real-life names have been removed already). This will apply to names of individuals mentioned in discussion, as opposed to direct address. The disclaimer may also be changed (see Question Two).
Here is another possible wording, note I changed the order of 'have been removed already'.
B) Replace the screen names of individuals indirectly referred to in the discussion with the anonymous placeholder *** (real-life names have already been removed). The disclaimer may also be changed (see Question Two).